Q. I
have to write a lot of reports and memos in my new job, and I’m
getting buried. I don’t know where to start—or stop—and
co-workers are complaining that my reports are hard to read. Any
suggestions
A. Writing
powerful memos and reports is really easier than you’d think—if
you’ll scrap some old habits. Try these techniques:
Jump-Start
the Process
Write
when you feel upbeat, and don’t try to write a major report in
one sitting. Write in stages: "sloppy copy;" working draft;
finished copy. Often, just taking "quiet time" between the
drafts will give you many good ideas. First step: write a focus
sentence that summarizes the main idea for the report or memo. This
acts like a target—a beacon to focus your attention. If you
can’t decide on what your focus sentence should be, write
sentences that answer each one of these questions: Who did it? What
happened? Why did it happen? When did it happen? Where did it happen?
Why did it happen? How did it happen? Choose any combination of these
sentences to create the focus for your report or letter, and write
that at the top of your report or letter—to help you stay
focused. Include in your report only the topics that relate to, or
support, your focus sentence.
Make
an Outline
You
need a plan to further focus the report—an outline.
Writing just a few words that nail down major and minor points will
give you good direction—and keep you focused on the topic.
Simply list the key ideas that develop the focus sentence. These are
your main points. Then expand your outline—develop your
topic—by supporting each main point with facts, examples,
comparisons, illustrations, research.
Plan
Your Ending/Intro
Readers
read your ending
last, so make it something they won’t easily forget. Last
step, “hook” your reader, with an introduction
that grabs attention fast. Example:
Two
out of three marketing programs launched this month will fail—
or
deliver less than expected. Let’s not make the same mistake
again.
(You’ll
find it easier and faster to write the introduction if you do it
last,
because you’ll have thought through everything else first.)
Now
write your first draft. And don’t get bogged down with grammar
or spelling just yet. Just "dump" everything you know about
the topic onto the paper or screen, as you develop the topics in the
outline. You’ll polish it up later. Once your first draft is
finished, revise it where necessary to make sure you:
Say it simply.
Use
who-did-what
word order. Choose
clear, direct, short words of one of two syllables, to make it easy
to read. (Try to use no more than six words that have three or more
syllables for every 100 words.)
Control
sentence length/style.
Mix long and short
sentences for variety: long sentences for complex ideas, short ones
for punch. For peak readability, keep your average sentence length
to about 17 words
Talk on paper.
Picture the reader—a
real person—sitting next you as you speak what you write. We
use personal words (you, we, I, us, our, etc.), when we talk
face-to-face; your writing should sound that way.
Cut
words you don't need.
If
a word or phrase gets in the way of your being simple and direct, get
rid of it. Hunt
whiches—
they often make sentences too long. Then, kill the which
and start a new sentence. Cut down on any “be”
words, too (be,
is, are, was, were, been, being, am.)
They make writing dull. Replace them with stronger verbs.
Energize
your writing.
Use
the active voice (we
decided;
not: the
decision was made.)
It’s
shorter, clearer, more direct. Say what you want,
what you can
do—not what you don’t
want, or can’t
do. Help readers get what they want and need. (If all you know is
what you don’t
want, you’ll get more of it.) And vary the way you start
sentences. Try starting them with sentences that answser who,
what, when, where, why, or how questions.
Write"one-idea"
sentences.
Put just one key idea
into each sentence. Put a related idea into a new sentence. KISS each
sentence (keep it short and simple.) And put only one key idea into
each paragraph.
Make action easy.
Put
any
request
for action where your reader can spot it fast: up front;
inside a ruled box; in
boldface; centered in the paragraph and surrounded with white space.
Both
you and your reader will find these guidelines really helpful. You’ll
write clearer, better reports, faster and more easily. And you’ll
save your reader’s time—nearly 40 seconds of reading time
for each 200-word page you write. That’s something we all
welcome.